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28 comments:

  1. I am in the tent
    I am sleeping peacfully
    the bear came, it's over

    Brody

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  2. Tornados

    tornados are cool
    they swirl and swirl and swirl, but
    they are dangerous

    joshua

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  3. Hockey kids are tough.
    They lose teeth, get cut open.
    Hockey is my life.


    Tory

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  4. It keeps builing up
    This same old pain never stops.
    When will we go back?

    Go back to the things
    that were known as you and me?
    Is this our new lives?

    You always told me
    that this love would never end.
    Did you know it would?

    Maybe "always" was
    your final lie. And love was
    just my hopeless cry.

    -Keely

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  5. It is cold outside
    But then the sun comes again
    I start to smile


    ~Kaycee~

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  6. Trees, the gentlest
    Swaying in the soft wind
    Leaves changing with seasons
    -Jas

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  7. sonw falling every
    were, so white and soft and cold
    so cold pleas dont leave.

    Andy

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  8. They said it was true
    the breakdown was comming fast
    School is just starting

    i'll always be here
    as your friend to back you up
    It fourth hour now

    cries behind a door
    i found you in the bathroom
    you tell me to leave

    crowds start to aappear
    everyone is watching now
    to see the breakdown

    Tessa:)

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  9. Nothing

    Alone, by myself
    Lost in a world of nothing
    Searching my way out

    The darkness surrounds
    Smothered, Scared, need to be free
    Still searching alone

    Nothing, horrified
    Is this all I get, darkness
    Nothing but Nothing

    Now I realize
    The out is in me, and I
    have nothing to find

    -Melissa

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  10. A friend should be nice
    a friend should always be there
    a friend should be true
    Joe

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  11. Hey, folks! Make sure when you are commenting on others' haikus that you double-check and comment on the following when necessary:
    spelling
    syllable count

    Remember: first line = 5 syllables
    second line = 7 syllables
    third line = 5 syllables

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  12. Some haikus are weird
    A lot did not make sence too
    Refridgarator


    -Carson

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  13. I'll call you tonight
    affraid of what you will say
    I may hesitate

    will you ask again
    please dont , i fear it will happen
    can i still say no

    i doubt myself now
    your calling me, help im scarred
    yet i still answer

    you ask once again
    youve tricked me, now i said yes
    are you satisfied

    ~Allison

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  14. will you talk to me
    let me say whats on my mind
    im down on my knees

    im begging you please
    explain to me what i did
    im so confused now

    at a loss of words
    you will look at me and say
    everything is fine

    i can see through you
    you mad at me once again
    so nothing is fine

    ~Allison

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  15. As we walk down this path
    hear the waves upon the sand
    see the stars shine down

    as we walk away
    we leave behind memories
    we must say good-bye

    we may come back soon
    i fear it may not be true
    living without you

    you seem so close by
    though silence seperates us
    where did it all go

    ~Allison

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  16. Andy you spelt pleasE wrong and all syables are in it yay! :) Keely yours is really good i like it

    Tessa:)

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  17. Age is just a number.

    First it was teasing
    Then suddenly it was more,
    I didn't want that

    Now thats all I want
    Age is just a number, right?
    Its not meant to be.

    -Cheyanne :D

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  18. Allison I really like yours. There so deep :)
    -Cheyanne

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  19. Perfect pink petal
    Pressed between leaves of a book
    Immortal beauty

    -- Mrs. Carr

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  20. To want love forever.
    Starts with being true to me.
    Then love will find me.

    -Kaitlin

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  21. Kids who write poems,
    Their words and meanings tumbling,
    Nourish heart and soul!

    --Mrs. C

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  22. Seagulls scream outloud,
    Endless waves crash along the shore,
    Always moving sea.

    -Megan

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  23. keely yours was like a poem and it had good use of the words and syllabals

    zack

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  24. andy yours was cool and probably about snowboarding but you spelt snow wrong


    zack

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  25. I saw a flower,
    It reminded me of you,
    I killed the flower.

    -Jenn :-)

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  26. allison,
    yours are so deep it seems to me like its comeing right from the heart this is wut poems are about =]
    ~Kaycee~

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  27. one day at the race
    i hit a jump and i fell
    and i broke my arm and leg

    zack

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  28. it was so peacefull untill
    the sound of nature came
    bursting into life.
    it was silent then the
    the woodpecker started up
    the forest of life. then i saw a few birds,butterflies,
    and a ground hog.so when you pay attentoin to detail you
    will find or hear something interesting

    zack

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